From sleep’s soft silence
Come vibrant violet visions
Amethyst dreamer
Bonjour Chers lecteurs,
I sort of failed miserably at the last writing course offered by Blogging U. So I am trying again. This time the subject is poetry. I love poetry, even if I’m too dense to “get it” sometimes. I decided I’d at least try my hand at it, and it gives me some prompts for writing, some ways to kind of get my blog “back on track” so to speak. I’ve been seriously lacking energy recently, and my poor blog has taken the brunt of it.
Anyway, for this course they are giving out 10 “assignments” each containing a word prompt, a poetic form, and a poetic device. They’ve left it up to us to use these or not, mix and match, or whatever. This is my answer to day 1 (see…I’m already a day behind in publishing, but I promise I was thinking about this on the actual “day 1.” )
Prompt: screen
Form: haiku
Device: alliteration
I always welcome criticism, the idea of this is to learn to write poetry. So don’t be shy, go ahead and be ruthless if you’d like to be. The current background photo on my screen is the inside of an amethyst geode, so that’s how I used “screen” and came up with what you see above!
à bientôt !
Beautiful
Thank you
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I love this!!
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Lovely alliterations. I really like it 🙂
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Thanks so much for reading it 🙂
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Nice, short and carries it off well
And you can never fail at writing, as long you do it for yourself
I still get ‘been’ and ‘being’ messed up after all these years!
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well, I failed at the last one in that I had good intentions but none of them made it onto either paper or screen! Doh! Thanks for reading my haiku 🙂
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It’s a very serene haiku, Kelli.
As for taking a ‘leave’ from Blogging U, don’t beat yourself up for not following through on every intention. We all take detours – some by choice and some by necessity.
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Thanks Sammy 🙂
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Loved this. 🙂
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Thank you !
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My pleasure. 🙂
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The Haiku is lovely the only thing is , and I am being brutally honest and pedantic the second line has 8 syllables. Violet has three syllables, Vi-O- Let .
It is however a beautiful Haiku! xxxxx
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interesting! You know, when I read it to myself, I think I pronounce “violet” with only two syllables…more like “Vi-lette” Which reminds me of another funny story one of my profs told us in college. But that’s for another post. Maybe. Thanks for the input, Willow. I’ll give that some thought and see if I could make it a “universal” 7-syllable line. 🙂
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the “O” is technically there, but I agree with you that when you read through it’s not really a separate syllable. Lovely Haiku and picture. Keeping up with a Blogging U course is really tough. How brave of you to go for another one, and poetry at that!
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Maybe it s because of our language difference… I know we both speak English! But I did double check violet, all that said it is a lovely and literal Haiku. xxxxxx
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The differences in regional pronunciations definitely make meter more difficult, I think! In any case I appreciate your input 🙂
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😉
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It occurs to me that by simply eliminating the word “come” in the second line, I could work with Vi-o-let and not lose a thing! Cool. Thanks again, Willow 🙂
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Yes that is brilliant …the perfect solution! ❤
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You did it. Beautiful words suiting the image.
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Thanks for reading 🙂
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une mer violette
les têtes aux airs de corail
les âmes tissent du rêve
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Merci d’avoir partagé ton poème en français, G – j’aime ça !
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